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Tresspasser and the Three Sisters
Author: Wayne Mitchel
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(Added on Feb 19, 2010)
(This month 25930 readers) (Total 36937 readers) |
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A young boy discovers that he likes to “hang around” with his cousins. He also finds out that being spanked does something other than cause him pain, but he is too young to know what is happening. No sexual content in this chapter. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dea Menrfa
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Feb 25, 2010 |
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Very, very nice.
Good background development. Solid characters. Unique idea for suspension device, though the description of its workings not overly detailed as to distract from the storyline.
I hope to see more of your work. (9/10)
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chuck
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Feb 22, 2010 |
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Lacks codes. I would suggest:
(F/m: F+/m: m-self: F/mf: spanking: BDSM: bondage: slow: humiliation: Serious)
I like description to set the scene and the author does grant a lot of description. However, in his attempt to convey the logistics, the description gets a bit too complicated and perhaps contradictory. (i.e. participants are: back to back, head to feet, butt to butt, one on right side, other on left side.) Doing mental gymnastics, I figure one of the descriptions has to be in error or I'm not interpreting it correctly.
It is a well written story with a logical story line and characters that the reader can relate to. Some of the activity is a bit "weird" for lack of a better term, but hey, it's a fantasy... and a good one at that.
I hope to see more stories from this author.
(9/10)
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