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The Game
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Feb 19, 2010)
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six girls agree to take part in sex games. Only one knew what to expect, the others trusted her. Maybe they shouldn\'t have done |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Jun 13, 2010 |
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Great story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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Mar 1, 2010 |
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A good story that I enjoyed.
It do not reach the highest quality of writing that can be found on this page, but it is above the average I'd say.
The content setting should perhaps be lowered from extreme to heavy, serious or light as there is no blood or body modification involved as far as I can see.
I don't think bdsm really get heavily involved in the story itself either although it's implied that the future destiny of the girls will involve it and one of the girls is the victim off some electric torture, also there is a little bondage involved, sedation, drugging of other kinds and some rough sex.
At any rate, take a look at the story code list: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/code_explain.php
Unfortunately some of the codes seams to be missing from that list like the xxx code so I can not comment on the use of that.
Other then those two codes the story seams to be correctly tagged, and possibly the xxx code is correct as well (depending on the requirements).
Off course judging what code to use is highly subjective..
At any rate you've made me curious as to the future fate of the girls involved.
I do not know if the story would improve if you told us about it or not but if you do tell us I'd love to read about it.
Losalt (9/10)
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scottishgent
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Feb 24, 2010 |
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Good story with a nice twist (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 23, 2010 |
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While the concept of the game in "The Game" may not be new, the handling is very well done. No cluttering of dialogue between the different participants, nor is there reason for confusion in those same dialogues. Something that isn't always easy when dealing with more than three characters at the same time...
Story is well told also, easy to follow with enough intrigue and 'action' to keep one's attention till the end.
The open ending leaves room for more, but "The Game" stands on its own as it is as well.
One of Excalibur's better efforts...
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2010)
- Thank you. Some times it is not easy to come up with totally new ideas, and though the idea of the game has been used previously, I tried to find a fresh and interesting way in which to present it. I am pleased you enjoyed it.
Excalibur
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 22, 2010 |
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Not the best story of this genre, I feel Rotnebs The Hunting Championship was a better story if only he could string an English sentence together, but the whole thing is so imp0lausible and could so easily have been made to work, it was an averge itertion of a standard tale, maybe part two will be original, I'm not holding my breath (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2010)
- I am sorry you didnt enjoy the story. I have not read the one you mentioned, so I could not actually compare it. Hopefully another of my stories will be more to your liking.
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| Reviewer:
Lillyrose123
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Feb 21, 2010 |
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i am, once again, in awe of Your writing skills, Excalibur.... will there be a sequel to this one? Please consider continuing....
One very hot story...One outstanding writer... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2010)
- Thank you for your kind words. I am pleased you enjoyed the story, though as yet, no plans for future episodes are planned., I rarely plan stories, they just happen.
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