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Just What she Always Wanted
Author: Ken
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(Added on Mar 21, 2010)
(This month 12822 readers) (Total 25301 readers) |
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A Woman has a Strange Desire. One she can not put her finger on.. . until she meets the Quiet One. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Mar 23, 2010 |
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I get the feeling that English isn't your first language. If that's true your doing a good job, much better than average.
About your story, I feel that your main character needs a little more explaining, that is her motive for going along with the man. In other word 'flesh' her out a bit more. I do like the story line itself even as much as it has been done before. Thanks for sharing this with us. (7/10)
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