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Feeding time at Zoo
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Jun 16, 2010)
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Susie and Several other young female students take on a challenge by their professor to runs naked race to Zoo to hand over a gift letter. The challenge is that the naked girls are the gift as live feed for the Zoo's carnivores. All expect the gift letter will be repealed shortly after the handover because it's all a joke. But the girls' legal responsible person stays away from the Zoo. Then the carnivores at Zoo will be spoiled with tasty live feed. |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Sep 23, 2012 |
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Good idea, but poor execution (pun!) and horrid grammar/English. (3/10)
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xspy4u
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Jun 22, 2010 |
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Uggg. I usually will not write a review if I can't at least go with a seven rating. Great concept Rotneb, but please work on the writing. Reading your work out loud can sometimes help clarify the writing. (2/10)
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Mr. Willit
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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This is actually only a review of the synopsis, basically because I could barely understand the synopsis. I would strongly advise anyone from trying to interpret this mess. (2/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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So, that's why the unemployment rate among university professors is so high; the students regularly get eaten at the local Zoo. Who would have thought.
I must admit I had quite a chuckle, reading "Feeding Time". Alas, the 'fun' I had was because of the bloody silly mistakes that are heaped-up in a pile that challenges the Eifel Tower in height.
Rubbish, I'm sad to say.
JJ (2/10)
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Major Littmann
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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Rotnebs best attempt yet, pleasantly sickening without a twist at the end and yet kept surreal by his pidgin english phraseology.
More likely to give nightmares than a hard on (3/10)
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