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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tjlewis132
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Jan 15, 2011 |
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Question... Is this an attempt to sell the story on another site? First, this is the BDSM library and most expect something of the bdsm scene in a story and I would think more then a little titillation at the very end would be appropriate for the viewers giving you their time. There are occasionally others who use the site for soliciting customers but usually its not just a leadup without any action. Not busting your balls, but maybe you should submit another chapter or so before going for the money. Really don't know how to rate it but I'll be fair and give you the benefit of the doubt that you'll add more with some action... Thanks... J LEWIS (9/10)
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