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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tyronesmash
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Jun 29, 2012 |
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One of the best BDSM stories ever posted. Great step-by-step account of a young girl's road to slavery. He almost makes it seem that this kind of thing really happens. I understand that making the girl 18 makes it "legal", but it would be a little more plausible if the girl was 13 or 14. An older girl isn't likely to be that dumb. (10/10)
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jrockitt
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Jun 14, 2012 |
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Good story on an old theme, and pretty well written (some spelling glitches-for example, it's descent, not decent, in the title. Arousing action, too, except the dog stuff is not a turnon, at least for me. (8/10)
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xCx
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Aug 11, 2011 |
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Great story :) x (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
pestville
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Jul 30, 2011 |
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I loved the story and cant wait to find out what happens to Tracy and to read other stories that you write at some point. Some of your spelling is a little off and could have been corrected had you read threw it but I didn't mind that myself. Keep up the hard work. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
amina70
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Jun 9, 2011 |
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WOOOOOOOOOW one of the absolute BEST stories in the library....As my fantasy is to be kidnapped i really envied Shannon that she faced that fate...That she was kidnapped...The only minus is the sex with the dogs,otherwise it was 100% excellent. Keep up the good work...will it be a part 2 -about Tracy and what will happen to her...?i surely hope so. (10/10)
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teleya
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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This is what I call a 'scum master' novel. This is when a person is a scum-bag and still manages to browbeat and demean a weak pathetic 'slave' until their personality and confidence is shattered and destroyed. A scum master only preys on the weak and vulnerable, and doesn't dare try to intimidate or dominate anybody with substance. The scum master knows well that they are inferior and they are incapable of controlling or dominating anybody worth while. They are a puny breed who are contemptible and invite a reaction of scorn. They lack charisma and have very little to offer either their slave or society at large. The only people that they are 'superior' to, are those that lack any confidence or self worth.
This book is about a scum master. It is well written and thought out. But at the end of the day i personally find scum masters to be boring subjects. I wish this author would use their obvious writing talents and write a book about a Master/Mistress who is worthy of that name. In my opinion, books about scum masters never deserve a rating over 7 (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2011)
- Points deducted because you dislike the story's subject are a perfect example of how not to write a review.
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jun 24, 2011)
- Nods in agreement with H. Dean.
- Replied by:
amina70
(Edit) (Jul 4, 2011)
- i agree with the 2 others.
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sedmwif
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Jun 3, 2011 |
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Might be the best story posted in 2011. Terrific piece of writing, great story. I really hope the author has more work that can be shared. (10/10)
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H Dean
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Jun 2, 2011 |
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Quite a good little romp. The writing was quite good, though there were some colloquialisms that should have been omitted and one or two mistakes - mistakes that come with editing your own writing.
The main knock I have on the tale is the pacing. It moved too fast and lacked proper exploration of the girl and her mindset - especially during and after the bestiality. Fortunately, that is the worst I can say about this story. (8/10)
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SirStef
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Jun 1, 2011 |
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Enjoyed immensley. I'll be watching for more of your writing (10/10)
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PieterM
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May 30, 2011 |
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Like the "War and Peace," of porn, the intro is dodgy but once you get into it it's a good read, although the 9 is more for quantity than quality of I'm honest. (9/10)
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