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The Family Feud II
Author: Amanda Serve
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 13 readers) (Total 26 readers) |
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A sequel to Family Feud. The Taylor women had been cruel and put the Taylor men through the ringer. It was their turn to face the music! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
hart_mut4711
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Aug 26, 2011 |
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I agree with artlover, part two is better than part one. I liked the slow build up, though, and the details. Seems more a matter of style.
Very good storyline. I would recommend using a spell check; some unnecessary typing errors. (9/10)
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artlover
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Jun 2, 2011 |
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Part two is better than part 1. Story seems to include more emotional perspective from the women. I love the turn about with the women. Still, writing somewhat undisciplined and story includes not only great action descriptions but a lot of unnecessary detail that detracts from enjoyment. Still a great premise for a story, needs work. (6/10)
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