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Tina and the Stuffed Pussy
Author: JujunAnon
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(Added on Jan 19, 2012)
(This month 2 readers) (Total 28303 readers) |
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A club owner takes advantage of Tina when he learns that she is on the run from the Mob. Tina reluctantly starts her job as the waitress and star attraction at a small club named "The Stuffed Pussy" |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DomBob
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Jan 27, 2012 |
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Good opening paragraph to draw user in.
Dialog was a bit formal or wrong for the age. Most 16 year old's would not say: "...even if I wanted to consider your proposal."
Under "Tinas First Night" - Eddie starts physical abuse right away. Pacing may have been better to let her suffer humiliation in the club before things got physical with him. She should also enjoy the attention a bit - be a bit turned on with the sexy outfit.
Technical Problem: I am using Chrome and there was funny graphic characters instead of double-quotes. This made it hard to tell dialog from text. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
grinner666
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2012)
- Same thing happens in Firefox and IE. I think it's a problem with the website, not any individual uploader. And yes, it blows big, nasty chunks.
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2012 |
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Pretty decent start we have here. Well worded train of thought and good dialogue too.
Let's see where we're taken next...
JJ (8/10)
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jip
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Jan 24, 2012 |
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Like it, hope more is following!! (8/10)
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lp1951
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Jan 21, 2012 |
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Really liked part one very much. Offers a new and different story line and Tina's first humiliation is very unique in comparsion to other stories. Looking forward to more parts and hopefully more original humiliation type situations for Tina.
(9/10)
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