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The LAW Student Author: bigbobby.
(Added on Mar 31, 2012) (This month 16110 readers) (Total 93171 readers)
From the headlines. 3rd year Law student at an eastern school is more than meets the eye as her story takes twists and turns.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: subalo (Edit) Rating: Apr 25, 2012
Grammar, spelling and use of the name are really off putting. I really had to struggle to finish a lot of it. (3/10)

Reviewer: Michael247 (Edit) Rating: Apr 6, 2012
Damn. Where's the rest of it?
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This is one of those classic spots where a simplistic plot and a fuck fest's worth of sex is smashed into as small a spot as possible. Despite the length of the work, the absolute shallowness of the characters, and the stilted action descriptions, this story seems to hum with a power that is quite... unexplainable.
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Part of me can't help wondering if this is a political satire as well as being erotica. The *ahem* similarities to a certain female, women's productive rights, law student at an "eastern school", who might have recently testified in front of Congress isn't very subtle. Maybe it's just a fluke. ;) I try to keep politics out of my writing, but this story captures the hypocrisy of a woman who is a productive rights activist, demanding that she get free contraceptive care because otherwise it would cost her a thousand dollars a year.
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From a story telling perspective, the tale is fast, choppy, and mostly dialog. It moves the plot quickly, but leaves most to your imagination. I could never write like this. It's the difference between having a porterhouse sirloin and getting a Big Mac. The problem is that while we all like a porterhouse, sometimes we WANT the Big Mac.
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I'm with Major Littmann about wanting the rest of this tale, and remember, I HATE serials.
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (8/10)

Reviewer: Major Littmann (Edit) Rating: Mar 31, 2012
Surprisingly exciting,I was not expecting much from 10kb but look forwad to further parts. (9/10)

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