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The Party From Hell
Author: Ashley S
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(Added on May 27, 2012)
(This month 55110 readers) (Total 77268 readers) |
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College Girl wanting to party and getting more than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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May 30, 2012 |
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For a first time it's sort of ok but reads like a statement to a criminal court and has great chunks of action missing, like the bit when the girl gets stripped when the lights go out, that's the good bit Ashley, we want to know how she feels when they grb her nd tear her clothes off or maybe carefully remove her clothes but one way or another she winds up naked and you don't tell us how. I'm sure your next story will be better. (5/10)
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