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The Perfect Housewife Author: Karen Kay
(Added on May 27, 2012) (This month 13581 readers) (Total 22644 readers)
A man marries a much younger woman. A knockout redhead named Keri with a gorgeous body. A handsome black man moves into the house next door and thinks her husband is her Father. Things get heated once the new neighbor starts flirting with the wife

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: Bellatheslut (Edit) Rating: Jun 9, 2012
I liked this as an opening chapter. It's well written and sets up the story nicely. I like the age thing, with his wife being mistaken for his daughter, and of course the interracial side of things too. Look forward to reading more soon. (8/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2012
If this is "barely readable" I suggest michaelkors goes to school to learn English... Furthermore, next to the three rating, it says "mediocre with barely acceptable grammar". Can't look inside michaelkors' head, so no word on the "mediocre" part, but Miss Kay is one of the handful of writers who make exceptionally few errors, so, it's highly unfair to rate the story at just three...
Me, I had no problems with this short story. Sounded nice with very believable characters.
Another above par effort from Karen Kay.
Was gonna go for a niner, but going all the way to compensate a bit on the three rating...
Regards,
JJ (10/10)

Reviewer: michaelkors (Edit) Rating: Jun 1, 2012
barely readable. can you at least try to make it sound real? (3/10)

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