Rhabbi,

This is quite a sensual and wonderful story. The idea that whether he can dance or not, she will find a way to share her passion with him for dancing... and other things ... is delightful.

The story is timeless, believable, touching and romantic.
Even the dialog fits the mood.

There are a few spelling & grammar errors.
Only a few. Most skimmers would miss them.

A missing letter on a word can change the meaning of a phrase:

...but though nothing of it.
versus
...but thought nothing of it.

A missing comma or two, if added, would help the pacing of the piece and make it easier to read.

Something else to think about: contractions.

I "did not" versus "didn't". If he is telling the story, the use of contractions will up the believability factor.

What else?

Keep up the great work!

Ruby