First Dance

[ElectricBadger]

Very well done, thank you for sharing!

I don't really have much in the way of comments, it's a short but very enjoyable piece that has great mood, voice and plot. A bit of technical brushing up (there's also a "too" in there that should be to) but I'm only nitpicking 'cause there's nothing larger to point out.

Again, great work!!!

[Rhabbi]

*claps* BEAUTIFUL! I really enjoyed that. It was so intense. It makes me want a "private dancer" of my own! Lovely lovely lovely. =)

Very well done, thank you for sharing!

I don't really have much in the way of comments, it's a short but very enjoyable piece that has great mood, voice and plot. A bit of technical brushing up (there's also a "too" in there that should be to) but I'm only nitpicking 'cause there's nothing larger to point out.

Again, great work!!!

Thank you both for the comments.