Thanks Mad. Reading your feedback and giving it some thought, I think as it stands this story is going to have a very limited readership. It's not going to appeal to men for obvious reasons, and it's not going to appeal to women because there's simply nothing erotic or romantic about it. I need to address that.

I'm going to take EB's advice and weave in some more detail about the characters' looks, and since this is an erotic story web site—some sex also.

I always enjoy reading what you say, Mad Lew, and how you say it, and I'm sorry I forgot about you and the Jesuits. *gg *

And, Mad Lew, I still love you both!

Alex