btw, very nice Alex, I like the revisions. Sorry it took me so long to get back to ya, I saw Chrome had done a marvelous job of reviewing though! Glad to hear you've found all the feedback helpful, I think your story has improved a ton!!!
btw, very nice Alex, I like the revisions. Sorry it took me so long to get back to ya, I saw Chrome had done a marvelous job of reviewing though! Glad to hear you've found all the feedback helpful, I think your story has improved a ton!!!
Back!
With your fiendish books of gods
With suffering self-righteous pain
Back!
With Hell-fire and vicious rods
With repressed passion gone insane
Back!
I won't lose my soul, too.
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